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Start and Stop poetry

May29

In the ocean

the waves go by

with surfers on them

doing snaps and turns

the waves build and build

untill the white wash comes

and gets thrown in the shallow waters

where all the little kids paly and splash

around happily

in the ocean.

 

When the sun sets

everyone begins to be quiet

and get ready for bed

they start cuddling up to their mum or dad

they get so warm

they feel like they are going to fall asleep

and before they know it they are sleeping

when the sun sets.

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5 Comments to

“Start and Stop poetry”

  1. June 10th, 2013 at 10:26 pm      Reply jessieb6 Says:

    HI ANG,
    I really liked you describing words and your starters.

    This is my start and stop poem…
    In the water,
    I feel the water on my face
    and i’m slowly slipping to the bottem.
    My face hits the ground I can feel the pressure of the water
    and the lights from the top on my face.
    In the water!

    Did you learn this with mrs marnane?

    How much start and stop poems did you do in your book?


  2. June 15th, 2013 at 6:22 am      Reply Millie J Says:

    Hi Ange,
    You have such a great blog by the way. And I also really like your start and stop poetry.


  3. June 18th, 2013 at 11:28 pm      Reply ellenc1 Says:

    Great writing
    What do you think you could of done better?
    I love your descriptive writing 🙂
    From Elly


    • June 19th, 2013 at 12:19 am      Reply aball Says:

      thankyou elly I think I could have put more
      describing words in my poems just to make it seem
      more exciting


  4. June 19th, 2013 at 8:47 pm      Reply jessieb6 Says:

    I LOVED YOUR START AND STOP POEM and I also LOVE Your background photo.


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